Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Jump to navigation Jump to search
Main pageTalk pageSubmissions
CategoryList (sorting)
ShowcaseAssessmentParticipants
TalkBy subject
Reviewing instructions
Helper script
Help
desk
Backlog
drives

Welcome to the Wikipedia Articles for Creation help desk

  • This page is only for questions about article submissions to Wikipedia. Are you in the right place?
  • For your own security, please do not provide your email address or other contact details. Answers will be provided on this page; we are unable to provide answers via email.
  • Please keep in mind that we are all volunteers, and sometimes a reply may take a little time. Your patience is appreciated.
  • Bona fide reviewers at Articles for Creation will never contact or solicit anyone for payment to get a draft into article space, improve a draft, or restore a deleted article. If someone contacts you with such an offer, please post on this help desk page.
Click here to ask a new question.

A reviewer should soon answer your question on this page. Please check back often.
Skip to today's questions · Skip to the bottom · Archived discussions


November 24[edit]

06:56:41, 24 November 2020 review of submission by Helix Sergey[edit]


Please re-review Nikhil Sharda draft as I think this is a notable article and will be helpful as well. I request you to give me some more advice on this.

Helix Sergey (talk) 06:56, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

Helix Sergey The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. A Wikipedia article must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a person, showing how they meet the special Wikipedia definition of a notable person. You offered only press release-type stories or announcements of routine transactions, which does not establish notability. Please read Your First Article for more information. 331dot (talk) 09:50, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

10:25:28, 24 November 2020 review of draft by Fhooe[edit]


Hi, I am from the University of Applied Sciences Upper Austria and recently noticed that there is a German wikipedia site for the University of Applied Sciences Upper Austria but no English one. As also english-taught programmes are offered, I thought that it could be helpful for not German-speaking students who might be interested to also provide the site in English. I mainly took the information from the website fh-ooe.at as there is no "independent" websites which are not taking their information also from the University. As for the CHE ranking for example I took the original CHE source. I formulated everything in an objective manner and only included content that might be relevant for wikipedia. Still my draft got declined... so now my question is: Am I not allowed to generate a site about the University? If yes, can I request somewhere that someone else generates it? Or is the University not relevant for the English wikipedia? Or is it not possible at all to generate a website for a University, for which most of the information that is online is coming from that University? Thanks a lot in advance! --Fhooe (talk) 10:25, 24 November 2020 (UTC) Fhooe (talk) 10:25, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

Fhooe I have posted some important information regarding your username and conflict of interest on your user talk page, please review it. Regarding your draft, (I think you mean "article", not "site") Wikipedia summarizes what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about an organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable organization. Wikipedia isn't interested in what an organization wants to say about itself(such as on its own website), only in what others unconnected with the organization say about it. If no independent sources write about your university, it would not merit an English Wikipedia article at this time.
Note that each language version of Wikipedia is its own project, with their own editors and policies. What is acceptable on one version isn't necessarily acceptable on another. 331dot (talk) 10:30, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

12:14:02, 24 November 2020 review of submission by 94.243.168.52[edit]


94.243.168.52 (talk) 12:14, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

@94.243.168.52: what is your question? Victor Schmidt mobil (talk) 12:20, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

16:18:27, 24 November 2020 review of submission by Abramsartistsnyc[edit]


Abramsartistsnyc (talk) 16:18, 24 November 2020 (UTC)


Please leave the editing to someone else. Our original biographer called to say he was being obstructed and gave us a list of users. Therefore, we are doing the process officially ourselves. Thank you.

Your draft has been rejected a number of times, repeatedly removing the rejection notice will not improve your chances of publication, only passing WP:GNG can do that. Theroadislong (talk) 16:45, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

16:26:39, 24 November 2020 review of submission by Abramsartistsnyc[edit]


Abramsartistsnyc (talk) 16:26, 24 November 2020 (UTC)


What else can I do besides being a firsthand?

16:33:55, 24 November 2020 review of submission by 70.114.31.252[edit]


70.114.31.252 (talk) 16:33, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

This draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. Repeatedly submitting an article without doing anything to address reviewers' concerns is a waste of both your time and theirs. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 20:01, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

17:34:39, 24 November 2020 review of draft by MichaelSali132[edit]

Why someone removed my article? I did add some references. I need to show this article to everyone.


MichaelSali132 (talk) 17:34, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

@MichaelSali132: You appear to be confused. Draft:Nahuel and the Magical Book still exists. However, you did nominate it for deletion here, so you should probably remove that template. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 19:07, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

19:45:58, 24 November 2020 review of submission by MichaelSali132[edit]

And how can I influence it like many articles here on Wikipedia?

MichaelSali132 (talk) 19:45, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

20:29:12, 24 November 2020 review of submission by Finales891[edit]


Finales891 (talk) 20:29, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

This looks like just a copy/paste of Citation Bot's userpage, not an actual article that can be reviewed. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 20:33, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

21:58:26, 24 November 2020 review of draft by PKUpdatesBllrd[edit]


I need help as this is my first time submitting a Wiki Page. I've submitted it and now I'm waiting will I be contacted through the email associated with my Wikipedia account or through Wiki but the talk area? However, I also added tags to the page in hopes that the process of being reviewed would go by quicker? Is that how it works as I submitted the page and now I see a yellow box on top of the page stating reviewing please be patient that means it's being reviewed correctly? Sorry for the questions this is my first time doing this.


PKUpdatesBllrd (talk) 21:58, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

The second question was already answered elsewhere. As for the first, you will be notified via your user talk page. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 22:29, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

November 25[edit]

01:33:46, 25 November 2020 review of draft by Siamak Naficy[edit]


Siamak Naficy (talk) 01:33, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

Hello,

I am unsure as to the necessary changes required. I am writing about the life about a very interesting person, a Persian/Iranian (and a Muslim) man who fought in the American Civil War. This person is one of perhaps 250 Asian and Pacific Islander peoples who served in the War. His life also speaks to the ideas of race and racism to the time. For example, he was also arrested briefly because another soldier decided that this person didn't look White enough to serve in a White unit.

The issue seems to be that he is not yet famous and so, besides his pension papers (which are available on online archives), various military papers, and his grave, there is not much that one can find. No books, no films, no TV shows. As someone who holds a PhD and is currently serving in the Department of Defense, I believe this is a notable person that I would like to research and write about further. My rough summary in Wikipedia could be a start.

Please advise.

Many Thanks, Siamak Naficy

Hi Siamak Naficy You're going about this backwards. You say there are few sources about the subject, some official military records and other primary documents. As you are in the military, and already have a PhD, I think you are ideally placed to write a proper academic article about this man. Get it published in a reputable academic journal, such as the Journal of Military History. That would in fact create exactly the type of source needed to sustain a Wikipedia article about him. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 18:01, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

03:41:27, 25 November 2020 review of draft by Mrpmcgoohan[edit]


I got a review on my page Basil Seggos asking for 3 additional sources to verify his notoriety. Could you be more specific about what constitutes verification of notoriety? The head of the NJ state environmental commission Catherine McCabe has a listed page and she is the same stature as Seggos.

Also could you specify which sentence was cut and paste? I am unsure which one the reviewer was referring to.

Thank you!

Mrpmcgoohan (talk) 03:41, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi Mrpmcgoohan comparing to otherarticles is not usually useful (see WP:OSE) but for a moment let's do so. Take a good look at the sources cited in the Catherine McCabe article; they include mainstream news media such as The Michigan Daily, CNN, Washington Post as well as other reputable sources such as the Columbia Law School website. Now look at the sources in your draft, there's nothing of comparable stature. So, dig a little deeper, look for sources that comply with both WP:Independent sources and WP:Reliable sources while containing substantial information about Seggos. Oh, and lastly "notoriety" is not the same as notability (as defined by Wikipedia policies). I hope this helps.Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 18:22, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

Help creating page for Joseph Raymond Lucero[edit]

04:51:30, 25 November 2020 review of draft by KatProducedThat[edit]


Hello. This is my first time attempting to make a draft/page. I want to make this page because I want more Brown and Black people to be on Wikipedia. Mr. Lucero is an actor and reformed gangmember who helps others change their lives after being incarcerated. He is an up-and-coming star with his third season on FX starting in 2020. I'm not a fan. I just happened to read about his story and thought it was important to try and document the contributions of more Black and Brown people. Anyways, I did my best to format it to the Wikipedia articles but I'm sure I didn't do everything correctly.

Things I need help with: - I published my changes. However, when I click "add tags to your draft". It says my draft cannot be found. I'm not sure how to fix this. - Could someone please look over what I have so far and make some suggestions? I suck at coding but I'd really like to write more for Wiki. If anyone is willing to mentor me a little, I would really appreciate the help in regards to headings, formatting, citations, etc. -

KatProducedThat (talk) 04:51, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

YouTube is rarely an acceptable source (and isn't in this case), and IMDb never is. Gov't documents, including the text of a law, are primary sources at best. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 17:52, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

05:24:21, 25 November 2020 review of submission by Tobias.Vogel[edit]

This draft was declined and I'm unable to pinpoint what is actually missing. I'm under the impression that I added sources and references as required by the various information pages, but obviously there is something missing. I would like to get to know what this is exactly.

Tobias.Vogel (talk) 05:24, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

Tobias.Vogel You have two sources in your draft; a topic must be covered in multiple independent reliable sources. There is no specific number required, but most reviewers look for at least three. The draft should then summarizes those sources. 331dot (talk) 09:13, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

05:58:54, 25 November 2020 review of submission by Pulkit3893[edit]


I've tried to be neutral with the language and tone of the submission; will trim it down further. Though it's my first submission, I did thoroughly study the guidelines for Wikipedia. I do understand the same is pretty vast and the importance of keeping the submissions and final approvals in alignment with the guidelines, I really would appreciate getting an immaculate understanding of the gaps, so that I can bridge them accordingly. The work by the artist in submission is unique, notable and inspiration for many.

We also have various other micro-artists as well with similar profiles(https://en.jinzhao.wiki/wiki/Venkatesh_Gattem), which initially inspired me to write this page for Dheeraj Kolla.

Please do let me know, how can I align it with the requisite guidelines and I shall make the necessary changes.

Pulkit3893 (talk) 05:58, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

(1) We are not interested in a rerun of the Seigenthaler incident. Every biographical claim the article makes requires a source. (2) The draft is blatantly promotional, such that I must ask you what your connexion to the subject is. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 17:48, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

07:38:08, 25 November 2020 review of submission by Kingdom2020[edit]


I want my article on the Kingdom of Laramidia to be published on wikipedia but it was turned down. So I request assistance on how I can improve or do any changes or issues I can solve or edit in my article in order for it to be submitted properly so that I can have the article published.

Kingdom2020 (talk) 07:38, 25 November 2020 (UTC)


I want to know how I can improve for my article for it to be published like how can I make changes for it to be specific on a certain topic or why was the article not submitted for because of some reason.

Kingdom2020 (talk) 07:40, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

Kingdom2020, sorry, as the topic is made up, it's impossible for it to have any sort of coverage which would show notability, apart from made up places (out of context which assert that they are real), being inappropriate for Wikipedia. Looking at it, there isn't anything you can do which would allow the article to be accepted. Dylsss(talk contribs) 08:21, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
Kingdom2020 In order for your micronation to merit an article, independent reliable sources that you have nothing to do with must have written about your micronation extensively, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of notability. There are micronations that do merit articles, such as the Principality of Sealand or Republic of Molossia, but independent sources have written about those micronations. If no one unconnected with you has written about your micronation, it would not merit an article at this time. 331dot (talk) 09:10, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

09:32:17, 25 November 2020 review of submission by 82.13.238.163[edit]


I recently submitted a new page to Wikipedia about the online music magazine, The New LoFi. It was dismissed on the grounds of having only "passing mentions." To the contrary, there are multiple reliable secondary sources (StereoFox, The London Echo Newspaper) which are independent of the subject.

In addition, other pages that are very similar to this submission have been accepted (see: https://en.jinzhao.wiki/wiki/Earmilk)

Can you please give a less generalized reason why this submission was decline. Specifics would be helpful.

Thanks for you help.

82.13.238.163 (talk) 09:32, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

WP:OSE. If you can wait until like 4 pm UTC when I am at home, I may be able to look more detailed into that. Note that your first argument here is logically incorrect, a source can be a passing mention and still be reliable and independent of the subject. See WP:CSMN. Victor Schmidt mobil (talk) 10:10, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
So here we go:
Source assessment table:
(This table may not be a final or consensus view; it may summarize developing consensus, or reflect assessments of a single editor.)
Source Independent? Reliable? Significant coverage? Count source toward GNG?
http//www.thenewlofi.com/about/ No About page Subject talking about itsel, consider WP:SELFPUB and WP:COI Three sentences and a bunch of images No
https://hypem.com/sites ? Does not mention the subject, therefore ucnertain ? reliability not known. No No mention of the subject; startage of some directoy listing No
https://www.submithub.com/blogs Yes probbably independent No blog No Couldn't locate anything about the subjecte No
https://www.stereofox.com/articles/best-music-blogs-and-radio-shows-in-2020/ partially what the subject said about itself Yes appears to be reliable No a single sentence about the subject No
https://walthamforestecho.co.uk/decade-of-discovery/ partially the subject's quotes Yes appears to be reliable If I remove all the subject's quotes, there is not much left — Partial
https://podcasts.apple.com/gb/podcast/the-new-lofi-mixtape/id1504713949 No Probbably no Podcast by the subject No no coveraage about the subject No
Table created using {{source assess table}}
If you want to assert a specific criteria of WP:NMUSIC, you probbably need to state what that might be Victor Schmidt (talk) 14:10, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
Victor Schmidt the subject is a website/e-zine so NMUSIC is not relevant. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 17:25, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

10:34:19, 25 November 2020 review of draft by TheBalticCount[edit]


TheBalticCount (talk) 10:34, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

I have drafted a wiki page for HEMPRESS SATIVA, made amendments months and months ago, but had no response.

TheBalticCount (talk) 10:34, 25 November 2020 (UTC)TheBalticCount

TheBalticCount As noted on your draft, "This may take 3 months or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 3,736 pending submissions waiting for review." Reviews are conducted by a limited number of volunteers who do reviews in no particular order; you will need to continue to be patient. 331dot (talk) 10:37, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

15:27:18, 25 November 2020 review of submission by Hans Davidow[edit]

I would like to have a better understanding of why my article was rejected the second time? I put the changes to the links. Hans Davidow (talk) 15:27, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

@Hans Davidow: Draft:Stages of the IOS app development appears to be an attempt to explain to the reader how to approach the creation of an iOS app. If you want to write such an article I suggest you use a blog platform or an alternative wiki. Wikipedia already has an article on Mobile app development, which you are welcome to expand, but please don't add 'how to' information as that's not what Wikipedia is for. If you're intending to write an essay, that's not what Wikipedia is for either. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 15:37, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
Seems like you have been told twice already, Wikipedia is not a 'how to' guide what don't you understand about that? Theroadislong (talk) 15:39, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

16:03:22, 25 November 2020 review of draft by Smederevac053[edit]


Dear Helpdesk,

Please clarify the specific reasons for a decline of publication of a new article. The reasons as I understand fall under the statement; "... his submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established...."

I understand the need for the type of sources required in the first place, but all references listed are from the public reliable and independent sources, like critics from the respective local daily Politika (in Serbian though), BBC news site, national television reviews, original musical shows announcements with VL appearances listed and one video also showing VL in performance with the choir.

Please comment why these references don't satisfy the independent, reliable, published sources criteria.

Thank you for your time.

Smederevac053 (talk) 16:03, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

We are not interested in a rerun of the Seigenthaler incident. The draft is lacking in sources for the biographical claims that it makes. In addition, "appears to read more like an advertisement" rarely has anything to do with the sourcing; it's more a criticism of how the article is written. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 17:44, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
@Smederevac053: Taking the BBC source that you mentioned, it is an interview, which means that while it is from a reliable published source, it is not independent, as an interview relies on the subject's participation as a source of the content. Interviews don't help to establish notability. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:46, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

18:00:17, 25 November 2020 review of submission by Digitalgoutam[edit]

Remembering the Policies of Wikipedia for submitting a New Profile, I contributed for an Indian Writer named Swati Bol. I believe that al the information that I provided are surely correct from my side. Digitalgoutam (talk) 18:00, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

@Digitalgoutam: WIkipedia does not contain "profiles", Wikipedia contains 'encyclopedic articles, mainly based on what reliable sources have decided to write about the subject without being feed. In addition, we are not interested in a rerun of the Seigenthaler incident. The draft is extremely hard to read, as many sentences start with "she". That may be appropiate in essays or newspaper articles as a stylistic device, but not on Wikipedia. Victor Schmidt (talk) 18:22, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

18:25:02, 25 November 2020 review of draft by Cew3390[edit]


Need help ensuring page is neutral in tone and getting it published as the legacy firm pages are live and outdated. Cew3390 (talk) 18:25, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

19:51:36, 25 November 2020 review of draft by ShariRobertsPR[edit]


I am in serious need of help trying to have my page Carlos Eugene Moore approved and moved to the articles section. No matter how many edits I make to the page, each and every reviewer finds something to disapprove it for. I have finally finished editing it based on the latest comment, and now it was disapproved for "sounding like an article" and "having too many junk sources," which was never mentioned in ANY of the other comments. I can not win. Please help me. ShariRobertsPR (talk) 19:51, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

ShariRobertsPR (talk) 19:51, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

@ShariRobertsPR: There is no guarantee that the article will be advanced to live space. To address your confusion, the first time the article was declined, (which I can see in the deletion history) it was because there were insufficient inline citations in a massive wall of text. It would be very difficult for our volunteers to verify the claims made in the article if none of the references are properly added in-line. The second time it was declined, was because an editor found that it was a giant copyright violation, with large swaths of content having been copied from a website related to the subject. That's also why the article was deleted. I'm sure you can imagine why the community doesn't want Wikipedia to be complicit shills in the theft of someone's intellectual property, right? These both seem to be pretty fast declines, and I don't see why someone would have read the article any further. After you recreated the article, it was declined for having poor sources and sounding like an advertisement, (not for "sounding like an article") and that's not surprising, since it appears you restored most of the copyright violations. And if you restored most of the copyright violations, it should not be surprising to you that it was declined yet again for containing copyright violations, just like what happened before. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:00, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

November 26[edit]

04:11:17, 26 November 2020 review of draft by Xlm0118[edit]


my draft was declined and the comment is “Does he pass WP:NACADEMIC. Even if he does, this "article" just seems to be turning wikipedia into linked in. It's not really very good; we learn little or nothing about him or his work. ” i am Confused about the WP:NACDAMIC and I also would like to know more things about this person is stories or something else?

Xlm0118 (talk) 04:11, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

05:48:13, 26 November 2020 review of draft by Goodlug[edit]


I have translated all content from the Chinese version to English without any adjustments. As the Chinese version has been already published, I don't quite understand how the English version is declined. Please let me know how I can improve the article. Goodlug (talk) 05:48, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

different Wikipedia are seperate projects with seperate (and not nessesarely identical) rules. See WP:OSE. Victor Schmidt mobil (talk) 07:16, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Draft:Jordan Cohen[edit]

Hi. I was suggested to come here. I improved an article, but apparently the old one that was rejected a whole bunch of times wasn't even on the same person. But if you come to the page to approve it is scary, because it was rejected so many times in the past. But he meets our basketball notablity standdard. Can someone look? Thanks. It is here. Draft:Jordan Cohen --184.153.21.19 (talk) 06:48, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi there - assuming you wrote the draft as it is right now, what I recommend doing is copying your draft (minus the AFC declines) into a new draft page, such as Draft:Jordan Cohen (basketball). This will ensure the page has a clean history moving forward, and avoids causing any confusion in the future. ~SuperHamster Talk Contribs 08:05, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
I have reviewed and passed it through AfC. The article is available at Jordan Cohen (basketball) I request @Cyphoidbomb:, or any admin to clear/remove any unnecessary history that can cause confusion in future. — Amkgp 💬 10:57, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

07:04:28, 26 November 2020 review of draft by Nenjie1991[edit]


Nenjie1991 (talk) 07:04, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

@Nenjie1991: Wikipedia is not interested in a rerun of the Seigenthaler incident. facebook is not a reliable source. ~~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Victor Schmidt mobil (talkcontribs) 07:10, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

I am making a biography but it was declined. I just wanted to make a biography. What's wrong with my draft? Nenjie1991 (talk) 07:21, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

@Nenjie1991: The draft is entirely unsourced (the only reference is a dead link). There's no indication why this person is notable i.e. why there should be an article about them in an encyclopedia. I think you are looking for LinkedIn? Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 11:03, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Request on 09:11:44, 26 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Teejaykarthi[edit]



Teejaykarthi (talk) 09:11, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Teejaykarthi Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves, sorry. Please see the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 10:55, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

10:47:48, 26 November 2020 review of submission by Rudoj[edit]

Hello! I have updated the article and it is based on Bloomberg news article.

Rudoj (talk) 10:47, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Rudoj The draft was a blatant piece of advertising. If you have a connection to Stereo, you must review conflict of interest and paid editing. I would suggest also reviewing Your First Article. 331dot (talk) 10:54, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

14:09:03, 26 November 2020 review of submission by Panjar ugo[edit]


Panjar ugo (talk) 14:09, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

We are not interested in a rerun of the Seigenthaler incident. We're an encyclopaedia, not social media. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 16:31, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

14:51:17, 26 November 2020 review of draft by 2409:4042:2E21:63AE:0:0:1108:4B0A[edit]


2409:4042:2E21:63AE:0:0:1108:4B0A (talk) 14:51, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

This is your only edit so far. Which draft are you refering to? Victor Schmidt (talk) 17:08, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

16:05:27, 26 November 2020 review of submission by McWa11[edit]


I'm trying to submit an article for review, but it says "AfC submission|||ts=20201126160527|u=McWa11|ns=4" doesn't exist as a template, and I only have a "Publish" button, not a "Submit for review" button. Please let me know how I can submit it for review! Thanks :)

Edit: subst:submit automatically changed to this template above ^. I added it to my page, and a template showed up, but now it says to replace it with "subst:submit" McWa11 (talk) 16:05, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Your draft has no content? Theroadislong (talk) 16:15, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

It does on my screen! Do I need to press "Publish page..." for other people to be able to see the draft? — Preceding unsigned comment added by McWa11 (talkcontribs) 16:21, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Yes. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 16:30, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
Thank you! McWa11 (talk) 16:47, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
I'm afraid I have declined it as reading like an advert. Theroadislong (talk) 17:01, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

16:49:28, 26 November 2020 review of submission by Airyami[edit]

I understand that you would like reliable sources, however, Miss Raisa is not well known, therefore there is not much information about her accessible. I have spoken with her personally and watched HER personal YouTube videos to gain knowledge. The point of this Wiki page would be to bring more attention and provide more accessible public information. Airyami (talk) 16:49, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Our job is not to spread the word about someone. In order for there to be an article, she must have been written about at length by multiple third-party sources. We cannot rely on anything she told you, as that instantly becomes impossible to verify should she be incapacitated or incommunicado. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 16:57, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

17:09:18, 26 November 2020 review of submission by Fardinraina[edit]


Fardinraina (talk) 17:09, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

This has correctly been rejected, it gives no indication whatsoever as to why they are notable and Instagram, facebook and Linkin.com are not independent sources. Theroadislong (talk) 17:17, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Request on 17:44:21, 26 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Aroon Shahzad[edit]


why my article publish is rejected please let me know so that i can work on it to improve.

Aroon Shahzad (talk) 17:44, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

No evidence of WP:NPERSON. Note that a Wikipedia article may not nessesarely be desireable. In addition, Wikipedia is not interested in a rerun of the Seigenthaler incident. Every claim in a biography of a living person needs to be backed up to a reliable source Victor Schmidt (talk) 17:47, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

21:56:22, 26 November 2020 review of submission by Ninquelosse[edit]


I want to start work on a new article about musician James Kirby.

Kirby is best known for his side project, The Caretaker (musician), which I spent a lot of time on this evening getting it up to a substantial article; but before that, he ran the record label V/Vm and released his own music through that. Kirby is absurdly prolific and frequently releases rough music or deletes everything from availability, making his discography both infinite and undocumentable, and each of these periods have very different influences and mood; this makes me feel that a single Kirby page is completely unworkable.

I want to make a new James Kirby page, which would focus on his life biography, with an overview of his music projects with a little information about each (including his work as Leyland Kirby and the Stranger and his other labels, which aren't notable enough for their own page), and then links to The Caretaker and V/Vm where those phases were explored in more detail (with a focus on releases, collaborators and music criticism). I feel his ouvre is complicated and messy enough that a single launchpad/hub with detailed branches each dedicated to a single idea is a less cluttered approach than trying to wrangle it into a single, long page.

But before I do that work I want to check that Kirby is independently notable enough, separating the pages like this is a good idea, and generally good wiki style. Cheers all.

EDIT TO ADD: I made a sample template of the new article, showing the structure and key areas it would cover, so you can see how it would differ from the current Caretaker and V/Vm pages

https://en.jinzhao.wiki/wiki/User:Ninquelosse/sandbox/James_Kirby

Ninquelosse (talk) 21:56, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

Ninquelosse (talk) 21:56, 26 November 2020 (UTC)


November 27[edit]

Request on 00:34:19, 27 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by CarlosK108[edit]



CarlosK108 (talk) 00:34, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi @CarlosK108: If you need help, please ask a question as it is unclear what you need help with. ~SuperHamster Talk Contribs 08:00, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

Request on 01:09:23, 27 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by RoseCastle[edit]


I submitted an article for Sandbanks Provincial Park in Newfoundland and it was rejected because the person who reviewed it did not realize the existing Sandbanks Provincial Park page is for a completely different provincial park in Ontario. They are not the same park and require different pages.

How do I get someone to sort this out? The article should not be rejected on these grounds as it is an error on the part of the reviewer.


RoseCastle (talk) 01:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi @RoseCastle: just wanted to confirm, looking at the article history it looks like this has been resolved, correct? And nice job on the article - looks great. ~SuperHamster Talk Contribs 07:58, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

04:44:31, 27 November 2020 review of submission by Emediapro[edit]


Emediapro (talk) 04:44, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi @Emediapro: First things first, please do not remove review templates, and do not resubmit the draft until you have made updates to the draft to resolve the reviewer's comments. In regards to your draft: Wikipedia article subjects need to be notable. What this means: Udit Bhanu needs to have received significant attention from multiple reliable and independent sources. It does not appear that there is enough coverage of Bhanu at this time to consider him notable for Wikipedia, and the article cannot be published. ~SuperHamster Talk Contribs 07:53, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

06:59:16, 27 November 2020 review of draft by Eb404[edit]


I've created a draft page and I'm trying to add some WikiProject tags to it. So I'm going to this page (linked from the draft article): https://en.jinzhao.wiki/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Add_WikiProject_tags?withJS=MediaWiki:AFC-add-project-tags.js&title=Draft:Null_Positiv Seeing the URL, I guess the name of the draft page should appear in the entry "Enter draft page title:", but it doesn't. And if I try to enter it manually, it doesn't appear in the choices. If I enter it anyway, it appears in red, which usually means there's something wrong. As you can see, the draft page name is "Null Positiv". Is there anything I'm doing wrong? Or should I just not care about the red and add tags anyway? Thanks! Eb404 (talk) 06:59, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

@Eb404: the input box expect's the draft's title including the "Draft:"-prefix, i.e. "Draft:Null Positiv", instead of "Null Positiv". I have also altered the instructions at Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Add_WikiProject_tags to speficially mention this, since you are not the first one to fail for that reason. Victor Schmidt mobil (talk) 09:28, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

11:36:33, 27 November 2020 review of submission by Reedocr[edit]


This is my first submission and sadly it has been rejected. I have tried to follow all the rules and have clearly submitted my COI.

Can you please help me understand the issue?

Reedocr (talk) 11:36, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

Wikipedia has essentially no interest in anything the company has to say about themselves. It is only interested in what people who have no connection with them have chosen to publish about them. The article should be limited to a summary of what such independent sources have said about them. Notability is judged by looking at the depth of coverage in independent, reliable, secondary sources. Nothing to indicate that it would pass Wikipedia:Notability (organizations and companies). Theroadislong (talk) 13:54, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

14:04:34, 27 November 2020 review of submission by ThiagoWinters[edit]

Hey,

Hope all is well.

I submitted a page for revision a few months ago. I am wondering if everything is ok with it or I should edit something for it to be submitted.

Best Regards and Thank you in advance. ThiagoWinters (talk) 14:04, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

This has been resubmitted on the 24th of September. Its likely that you recive an answer soon. Victor Schmidt (talk) 14:13, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

16:00:35, 27 November 2020 review of draft by Azzllaann[edit]


Hello, I submitted this piece here but it was rejected. Could you assist in letting me know how I can improve this article or what changes I can make so that this article will be published?

Azzllaann (talk) 16:00, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

16:30:18, 27 November 2020 review of draft by 82.3.185.12[edit]


I created this page but I don't think it worked. I edited it and tried again and I still can't see it. It said the page is https://en.jinzhao.wiki/wiki/Draft:Justine_Tung but when I visit it I see nothing there. It is my first time creating a page and did I do something wrong? 82.3.185.12 (talk) 16:30, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

You have created the draft but it gives no indication as to what makes the person notable in Wikipedia terms, it also has no sources so would not be accepted if submitted. Theroadislong (talk) 16:33, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
Can you help me? 82.3.185.12 (talk) 16:38, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
I did a google search, and it looks like this is a classic case of WP:TOOSOON. Only WP:UGC stuff, and a bunch of other runreliable sources. Long text, short meaning: Not notable yet. Maybe try something different. Note that no amount of editing can circumvent missing notability. Victor Schmidt (talk) 17:11, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
I'm sorry, but I don't understand what it says on WP:TOOSOON. All the information is correct and I can prove it all. Google Justine Tung and it will tell you she's astroaxus, she announced she's from Arcadia on Twitter, her NVT6 entries are on their page, she's in the credits on Psiren's song, and LA Escape Game is both on her Twitter and LinkedIn. That is 5 different sources. 82.3.185.12 (talk) 17:14, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
None of which are reliable or independent I'm afraid. Theroadislong (talk) 17:29, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
What counts as reliable then? 82.3.185.12 (talk) 17:32, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
See reliable sources. Theroadislong (talk) 17:38, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
I agree than one source on its own is unreliable, but I think if you combine all five, then that makes it reliable 82.3.185.12 (talk) 17:41, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
errr no...that just makes 5 unreliable sources? Theroadislong (talk) 17:55, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
Combining all five doesn't make them reliable. Sources don't get more reliable if you aggregate them. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 22:41, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

16:49:54, 27 November 2020 review of submission by Musc-life[edit]

I am trying to establish an article about Yara Bou Monsef, she is new in this field and there is no reliable written nor published resources about her yet. It is important to us to showcase her in your site, if possible. Musc-life (talk) 16:49, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

@Musc-life: I am afraid that if there are no published reliable sources right now, its WP:TOOSOON for an article on this topic. 17:00, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
Really, a verified tick and 70k followers on Insta is quite a lot. 82.3.185.12 (talk) 17:28, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
But still doesn't satisfy any of WP:V WP:BLP WP:NPERSON or WP:RS or WP:SELFPUB or WP:PRIMARY. You are welcome to attempt and change the rules, but I am afraid that would be trying to mine Bedrock with your fist. Victor Schmidt (talk) 17:36, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

22:36:26, 27 November 2020 review of submission by CarlosK108[edit]


CarlosK108 (talk) 22:36, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

What does your schedule.

in re User:CarlosK108/sandbox Might I recommend editing the Wikipedia for your native language instead? —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 22:40, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

November 28[edit]

11:18:03, 28 November 2020 review of submission by 185.219.167.248[edit]


185.219.167.248 (talk) 11:18, 28 November 2020 (UTC) Hi, Please let me know why this page rejected?

The reasons for rejection are indicated at the top of that list article. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 13:22, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

12:13:35, 28 November 2020 review of submission by Minhajur Rahman Taseen[edit]


Minhajur Rahman Taseen (talk) 12:13, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Your draft was rejected, you will not improve your chances of acceptance by removing the rejection notice. Theroadislong (talk) 12:18, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Request on 15:45:59, 28 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by N0c2c1[edit]



N0c2c1 (talk) 15:45, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

N0c2c1 (talk) 15:46, 28 November 2020 (UTC)please don't delete!== 15:46:37, 28 November 2020 review of submission by N0c2c1 ==


N0c2c1 (talk) 15:46, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

@N0c2c1: this topic does not appear to meet WP:NPERSON. In addition, Wikipedia is not interested in a rerun of the Seigenthaler incident. This draft cannot be verified without a search engine. Also, it currently suffers from excessive links. Victor Schmidt (talk) 17:18, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

16:11:42, 28 November 2020 review of draft by 82.3.185.12[edit]


My article was rejected, what can I do to get it improved and accepted? Oh, and is aceattorney.fandom.com a valid source? 82.3.185.12 (talk) 16:11, 28 November 2020 (UTC) 82.3.185.12 (talk) 16:11, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Your draft was declined not rejected, aceattorney.fandom.com is not a reliable source because it is user edited. Theroadislong (talk) 16:36, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
FYI: We had this same draft literally yesterday. While it hasn't been rejected yet, a google search back then didn't bring up something contributing notability. We also had a lengthely conversion with I assume the same Person as behind this IP about reliable sources. See above thread from yesterday (#16:30:18, 27 November 2020 review of draft by 82.3.185.12). Victor Schmidt (talk) 17:23, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
I know my draft was declined, that's why I want to know how to improve it & get it accepted. 82.3.185.12 (talk) 17:48, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
It's simple, in order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide multiple references to in-depth articles written about Justine Tung in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books or online. If there are no sources then we can’t have an article about them. Theroadislong (talk) 17:52, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
Like this one? 82.3.185.12 (talk) 17:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
Also, Google 'astroaxus' and you'll find loads of stuff 82.3.185.12 (talk) 18:07, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
Sigh...www.justinetung.com is her own website so is NOT independent. Theroadislong (talk)
OK I think we're done here, googling "astroaxus" brings up zero independent sources. Theroadislong (talk) 18:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Request on 17:44:38, 28 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by ZianSaal[edit]



ZianSaal (talk) 17:44, 28 November 2020 (UTC) So, I wanted it to be accepted, and I went back and edited it. I gave more information on brilliant moves and added another position on Sunday (Draft:Brilliant move). I will try and add more positions overtime. When can you accept it? Sincerely, Zikrain

@ZianSaal: There is no guarantee that draft articles will be accepted, sorry, and there have been no substantive improvements since it was declined. Regards, Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:59, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

20:04:36, 28 November 2020 review of submission by Rantaiqi[edit]


Could you please provide the recommendation? Thanks. Rantaiqi (talk) 20:04, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Rantaiqi Your draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. 331dot (talk) 20:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

20:15:24, 28 November 2020 review of draft by Drhunterhamilton21[edit]


I'm a new user to Wikipedia and don't understand much because I have Autism spectrum disorder. Can you please highlight the mistakes I made and tell me what needs to be cut out in order for the article to be published? Drhunterhamilton21 (talk) 20:15, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

WP:CRIMINAL says... a person who is known only in connection with a criminal event or trial should not normally be the subject of a separate Wikipedia article. So it's not a question of what needs to be cut out, it's a question of whether they are notable enough for an article. Theroadislong (talk) 20:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
Drhunterhamilton21 Also, you refer to David Ware as a murderer, but the trial has not occured. WP:CRIMINAL indicates that the person should be counted as a suspect then. The article should probably be named something like 2020 Tulsa Oklahoma Police shooting (If it is notable enough).Naraht (talk) 22:24, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

23:44:15, 28 November 2020 review of submission by 89.205.138.145[edit]

{{SAFESUBST:Void|


Good day, My page 89.205.138.145 has not been approved. I would like to have advise in improving it or making it suitable for Wiki-norms. The content we want to host is consistent when it is in final form. It will probably wont get any longer then we currently requested for. I am new to Wiki! A.I.Cloud

Hello IP editor. Your unreferenced draft seems to consist of some form of original research and is unacceptable for this encyclopedia. Cullen328 Let's discuss it 23:50, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

November 29

07:36:02, 29 November 2020 review of draft by Shahramsh452[edit]


Shahramsh452 (talk) 07:36, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

Shahramsh452 You don't ask a question; I assume this has to do with the draft you wrote(which I've fixed the link to above). 331dot (talk) 09:48, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
 Declined for the reasons explained on the draft. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:52, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

08:44:36, 29 November 2020 review of draft by Amirhossein bazvand[edit]


Amirhossein bazvand (talk) 08:44, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

Amirhossein bazvand You don't ask a question. 331dot (talk) 09:47, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

09:49:01, 29 November 2020 review of submission by 82.3.185.12[edit]

Hi guys, just wanted to let you know most of the sources on this page are tweets. 82.3.185.12 (talk) 09:49, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

Hello, the proper place to bring this up would be the article talk page, Talk:Bang Zoom! Entertainment. This page is for users to ask questions about drafts they have created. The general help desk is at WP:HD for future reference. 331dot (talk) 09:51, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
Please see other crap exists finding a poorly sourced article, is no excuse for creating another at Draft:Justine Tung. Theroadislong (talk) 10:14, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

Request on 14:36:51, 29 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Beth Wimmer[edit]


Hello, I'm requesting assistance by staying in communication about his article. I'll continue to work on this article, and i'll be resubmitting it. I think the article I created does meet the criteria for being noteworthy, and does have reliable sources. This is an article about a person who is widely agreed on, in the important "Vierländerregion" in Europe (the four-country region near Lake Constance consisting of Austria, Switzerland, Germany, and Liechtenstein) and in the UK and USA, as being a cutting-edge technology sound recorder, project creator, and producer. I will find and add some more reliable sources, and try linking this article to other notable musicians' Wikipedia articles (Fred Wesley, Simon Phillips) who laud and endorse the validity of Manfred Konzett's being a person of note. I've read the recommended Wikipedia help pages that were highlighted in the reason for denial of my article, including 'Referencing for beginners', and mistakes to avoid when resubmitting an article. I still believe in this article I'm creating, and will try again with it. Lastly, I am still trying to address the proper crediting problem with image File:Manfred "Little" Konzett working at a Solid State Logic 4000 G+ Series mixing desk.jpeg and other images i'd uploaded months ago, but I think the images are no longer to be found on Wikipedia? Yet, when I tried uploading that image (just noted) once again, a second attempt, there was a window that came up saying this image seems to have already been uploaded, and this time around, the system would not let me complete the photo credit information. To be honest, I am finding adding a photo to the article very difficult, which is a shame as the photos themselves add to the validity of the article. If you have an advice for me, I'd be grateful. Otherwise, i'll just edit and add to the article, do my best to verify everything, and resubmit when I feel it's ready. Thank you very kindly for your time. Beth Wimmer (talk) 14:36, 29 November 2020 (UTC) Beth Wimmer (talk) 14:36, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

It would be helpful if you could suggest how you think they pass WP:NMUSICIAN. Theroadislong (talk) 14:53, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
@Beth Wimmer: It's not clear to me exactly what you are purporting he is notable for. For being a musician? For being a recording engineer? Everybody has to work, but that doesn't mean that every working person deserves an encyclopedia article. A plumber is just as hard-working as a recording engineer, but just because the plumber fixes the pipes of the rich and famous, or uses the most expensive wrenches in the world, doesn't mean that he is notable. So the obstacle here is that you're going to have to demonstrate why this person deserves an encyclopedia article. Did he create any sort of landmark recording technique that won him attention from his peers and the music world? For instance, people are very well aware of Phil Spector's Wall of Sound, a recording technique that had a tangible impact on American music at the time. You will need to find references that speak about Konzett and his recording work in great detail if that's why he is notable. See WP:GNG in addition to what Theroadislong has noted above. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 20:55, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

17:22:44, 29 November 2020 review of draft by MyceliumX[edit]


Hi, I was trying to upload a head shot to Draft: Sher Doruff but wasn't able to publish it. MyceliumX (talk) 17:22, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

MyceliumX You don't yet have enough edits to be able to upload images (you need 10 or more edits). 331dot (talk) 18:05, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
@MyceliumX: And once you have enough edits to upload images, you need to be careful about that headshot. It is no doubt copyrighted (as most things are by default) and a copyright violation would not be acceptable. You should probably read our copyright policy as well as our policy on our policy on non-free content. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 20:57, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
Images don't help a draft anyway. Focus on the text and sourcing. —A little blue Bori v^_^v Takes a strong man to deny... 21:39, 29 November 2020 (UTC)


November 30[edit]

02:40:06, 30 November 2020 review of submission by Goodlug[edit]


I am working on an English version of a Chinese page. Everything is translated from Chinese directly. As the Chinese version has already been published, I wonder why my submission of English version is declined.

Goodlug (talk) 02:40, 30 November 2020 (UTC)

Please see WP:OSE. The chinese Wikipedia is a seperate Wikipedia with (possibly) seperate rules. Victor Schmidt mobil (talk) 07:29, 30 November 2020 (UTC)

09:47:39, 30 November 2020 review of submission by Actingadviser[edit]


Actingadviser (talk) 09:47, 30 November 2020 (UTC)

Actingadviser You don't ask a question. 331dot (talk) 09:57, 30 November 2020 (UTC)
Courtesy link Draft:Mandar Kulkarni, draft not submitted yet?. Theroadislong (talk) 09:59, 30 November 2020 (UTC)